Rewriting a Well-Written Article
Yesterday, The New York Times published an expose about the relationships that NFL teams have with local law enforcement and how these relationships may leave domestic violence victims without adequate protection. I highly recommend reading this article. It examines on e such case in Florida where the abuser/player was allowed to exit through a rear door to avoid reporters, was given a ride from the station, to the team training complex, then to his (and the victim's) residence to gather some belongings. All this while being escorted by an off-duty law enforcement officer, still in uniform, and operating an unmarked car, which could have been property of the officer or the department. One of the exercises that bloggers can utilize is to re-write an insensitive or offensive article in the manner you wish the author would have. I obviously do not believe myself to be a superior writer to Steve Eder, of The New York Times, but I would like to take this...